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2015年优秀SAT写作范文汇总

为了帮助大家备考SAT写作,今天为大家搜集整理了一些优秀的sat写作范文和SAT写作范文的特点!大家要知道,优秀的写作首先要文章整体轮廓清晰,首尾最不能忽视,表达的内容要简单精确,一般分三到四段为好;其次字数要适中,虽然SAT作文没有字数的限制,但四百左右为好,太短的文章不能够说明问题;最后就是文章内容要有论点有论据,例证要恰当。

优秀SAT写作范文赏析

Do we need other people in order to understand ourselves?

Most parents and teachers tell students the extremely tired cliché of the consequences of following the crowd. It is said that, in order to be a competely individual thinker, one must ignore what others say. Such advice is certainly true to some extent; unreasonable malice must be forgotten in order to keep some level of self-esteem. However, as with most ideas, this one can not be taken in absolute form. In at least some respects, we need other people in order to understand ourselves.

An excellent example of a literary character who could have psychologically benefitted from social interaction is J. Alfred Prufrock from T.S. Eliot’s poem “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock.” In the poem, Prufrck desires a relationship with a woman very much, but he refrains from initiating conversation because he fears that he could not hold the interest of a sophisticated lady. Should Prufrock have taken the step to accept other people into his life, he most likely would have discovered, as the reader of the poem certainly did, that he is most articulate. Others would have impressed upon him the beauty of his words and his talent for prose. If Prufrock would have spoken his song a loud, the ladies surely would have shown him what he himself did not understand. Since the ladies would reveal Prufrock’s talents to him, it is true that we need others in order to understand ourselves.SAT

The lesson of learning from other’s opinions of yourself extends much farther than the song of a fictional character. Two days ago, in an art class, my group of students had assigned self portraits due. Most of us brought in photographs of ourselves. Nevertheless, one boy brought nothing and handed us all slips of paper. He told us to write a word to describe him, and when we had done so, he pasted the words on a poster. This must have been a revealing exercise for him because, upon the sight of such descriptions as “bitter” and “sarcastic”, he was shocked. In the case of this boy, he had not realized how his personality appeared to others. Though he might not have thought himself “bitter”, his friend’s comments certainly made him seem that way. The fact that we need others in order to understand ourselves is clearly shown by this boy’s revelation.(389)

大家觉得这篇作文是不是有优秀呢,收尾表达明确,内容清晰明了,段落及字数都达到标准水平,希望大家能够参照此文章,顺利考取SAT写作高分。

优秀的SAT Essay范文

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below:

Abraham Lincoln said, "Most people are about as happy as they make up their minds to be." In other words, our personal level of satisfaction is entirely within our control. Otherwise, why would the same experience disappoint one person but delight another? Happiness is not an accident but a choice.

Assignment: Is happiness something over which people have no control, or can people choose to be happy? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

My Essay:

Happiness is an elixir to all diseases, so everyone wants happiness and most of them think that it comes from success. But even if we fail something, we can still choose to be happy.

Last year, our school held a basketball competition. Our class had entered into the semi-final and all the students in our class were very excited. Moreover, we had just beaten the team which was considered the best in our grade and my classmates were hopeful that we might enter the final game. On the day of the semi-final, the players of our team went to the field in our cheers. But as soon as we saw the members of the other team, we knew it would be a hard match. One of the players in their team is as tall as 1.93 m, much taller than any of our players and we also learned that their team was the only one which hadn’t lost a single game.

The match started. To our disappointment, our team wasn’t playing well, and the best player in our team was followed by the tallest in theirs at every pace. Anxious and worried, we girls jumped onto the platform beside and shouted at the top of our voices. After sometime, it seemed that our cheers had gave my classmates some energy and they began to catch up, slowly but gradually, we were only two points behind. But just at that time, the first ten minutes were over and we came to a stop. The players were tired but hopeful, and we kept cheering them. However, when the match started again, our opponents seemed to become stronger. They got more points and we were soon eleven points behind. Meanwhile, our throats were burning, but we kept shouting for our classmates. Though we caught up some points, at last we lost by only one point.

When we got back to the classroom, all of my classmates were disappointed and sad. One of the players even cried. But our teacher came in at that moment and said, “Cheer up everyone, we just lost by one point and we are already the top four. We still have a match and let’s get the third place!” Then one of my classmates suddenly went to the dais and wrote something encouraging on the blackboard and one by one, over ten of our classmates all wrote down the words they wanted to say. All of us were greatly encouraged and smiled. We felt a sense of happiness even though we didn’t win.

So if we choose to be happy, we’ll be happy. It’s all up to our choices.

优秀SAT写作范文的特点

看了一些SAT官方范文,对比自己的作文,发现SAT官方作文具有以下特点。尽管许多内容已经很重复了,可我们还是想总结一下。

中心:在首段用一个较为复杂的句式表述清楚,这个很重要。

结构:首段-例子一-例子二-结尾的模式。还算可以,不过别的结构如三个例子,一个例子,两个例子一个议论段也可。

语言:较少语病(当然即便范文也是有语病的,每读一篇6分的都发现几个小错误);句式复杂(长句,定语、状语等从句,虚拟语气,转折等等)。文字不见得很优美,可是逻辑性要好。

内容:避免罗列事实,但要有一定细节。每个例子后面一定要有议论,比例大概为4:3-5:3。

衔接:最好用较明显的句子衔接。也是得分点。

结尾段:并不是得分点所在,一句话结尾的,甚至没写完的6分文也大有所在。

字数:超过一篇半。

上述就我们小站整理的SAT写作范文的相关介绍,希望大家能够熟知这些SAT写作范文的特点,并合理写出理想的文章来!

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