网站导航     在线客服  
全部
SAT模考免费下载
   首页    SAT   冲刺宝典   SAT写作   正文
学生选择在小站备考:30天 306753名,今日申请5425人    备考咨询 >>

美国高中生观点型写作范文赏析--Over the Egde

2017年03月10日13:25 来源:小站教育
参与(5) 阅读(925)
摘要:从今天起,小站君会分享给大家一系列美国高中生写的范文,文中配有注释。我们可以多多学习本土学生的写作思维,更多吸取他们的精华内容。本文这里分享的是观点型写作,关于话题边缘之上,我们一起来看。

这篇文章先从一个贫穷孤独的小男生说起,分析了美国学校欺凌的现状,我们一起来看一下。

Over the Edge

Picture a young, teenage boy; He has no friends and he is ignored at home. His family doesn’t have much money for clothes, so he often wears the same outfits. The things he wears are dark in color; he just wants to blend in. These efforts are pointless because he is still singled out. He’s called dirty and made fun of for the way he dresses; no matter what, he just can’t fit in. He’s alone and miserable; he’s angry at the world and God for letting it be this way. He’s approaching a new state of mind: depression. His life is grueling, with constant barrages of hate inflicted upon him. Whether they are verbal or physical, to him, they all mean one thing: nobody cares about him. He just wants it all to be over.

美国高中生观点型写作范文赏析--Over the Egde图1

美国本土高中生观点题型写作范文汇总,点击进入

Bullying is a growing trend in American schools. It is a double edged sword that destroys the lives of targets one small blow at a time. Kids all over are singled out just like this. Some try to justify the things they do by saying that they are simply kidding, or the target shouldn’t have taken it so seriously. In reality, this is the worst kind of bullying. People convince themselves that the things they say are perfectly fine, and without even realizing it, continue to bombard a target with consistent hatred. These seemingly innocent words are often the ones that will leave the biggest impact on their victims and affect them the most after an extended period of time.

Everyday teens are committing suicide because they cannot take the abuse any longer. They hate lives because of the way they are treated. From now on, when that “weird kid” is sitting alone, isolated from everyone else, or trying to join in on what is going on, instead of striking that person with the blade of hatred, say something nice and make that person feel accepted, because nobody knows exactly how close that person may be to the edge. Before the blow is made, think: how would it feel to deliver the final blow – the one that sends a person over the edge – the one that ends a life?

重点词汇短语:

ignore 忽略

outfit 套装

blend in 与..协调

pointless 无意义的

miserable 悲惨的

depression 沮丧,萎靡不振

grueling 使极度疲劳的

inflict 把...强加给

hatred 仇恨,憎恶

大家都在学

看完这篇文章有何感觉?已经有5人表态,100%的人喜欢

相关文章

SAT写作常用万能例子汇总、附带新SAT写作指南 2012年至2015年所有SAT作文题目汇总 5月7日新SAT写作北美东部考题解析 新SAT首考写作阅读文章为什么选择了:A call for... 【吐血整理】SAT写作官方样题考生范文汇总:Let The... 6月4日亚太卷新SAT考试写作参考范文出炉啦! 【强势集结】美国本土高中生观点型写作范文汇总(持续更新中) 2014年SAT考试作文真题题大盘点(北美区)

10天SAT知道热度排行

10天SAT知道点赞榜

SAT30天热搜

【小站SAT官网】SAT考试为您提供最新SAT备考资料,SAT机经预测,SAT阅读、写作、词汇、语法真题下载,更有SAT报名、SAT培训等特色服务