SAT写作经典范文之Popularity

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摘要：SAT考试中，写作往往会给很多考生带来困扰，这主要还是由于我们广大高中生接触英语时间还不够长，没有养成一定的语言习惯和语境，这个时候就需要一些技巧方面的东西来弥补。希望广大SAT考生在看过这篇范文文章后会发现自己的不足之处和别人的长处，将来在SAT写作考试中发挥出自己的实力。

曾几何时，当我们还年轻的时候，都是所谓的潮流Popularity的弄潮儿，每天不听家长和话，每天疯狂的追星，就是要做和别人不一样的事情，这样才能突出我们的个性，张扬我们的性格。但这样做真的对吗?我们追求的是什么呢?是一种自由?奔放?还是为了获得内心的平静?这篇SAT作文范文的主要内容是讨论了最好不要追求流行，因为它不会给人带来好处，也不会带来平静，你同意还是不同意这个观点呢?下面就看看这篇SAT的经典范文。

作文要求：

Think carefully about the following passage andthe assignment below.

William Penn said, "Avoid popularity; it has many snares, and no real benefit."

A century later, Abraham Lincoln said, "Avoid popularity if you would have peace."

Do you agree or disagree that popularity is best not pursued since it has no benefits norgives a person peace ? Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from yourreading, experiences or observations.

SAT作文范文：

I agree that popularity is not something worth pursuing. The benefits are minimal and allhave notable drawbacks. Plus, popularity increases drama in life for both the popular and theunpopular.

There are really no real benefits that popular people get. They don't automatically getgood grades just because they are well liked by their peers. Because they are consideredpopular in the first place, people are often scrutinizing the little details such as the popularone's reaction to a comment, from another person. To be dissected and watched like ananimal in a zoo certainly does not seem like a benefit. Also, what "popular" people say is heardby all. One wrong slip of the tongue can send rumors spiraling out of control and destroyfriendships, and cause much unneeded drama.

I don't believe "popularity" can give someone a sense of peace. There is a quote that sayssomething like, "I would rather have a few close friend than a thousand acquaintances." Apopular person may, on the outside, seem to have all the friends in the world. On the inside,however, he or she may be screaming for one true and loyal friend to talk to.

It seems almost as if "popular" people have a certain "authority" over others. Thepopular kid always seems to have his/her "close friends" who are nothing more than attention-starved followers. Popularity can not be determined by how many friends one may have or whothe coolest dressed person is. Abraham Lincoln’s quote about avoiding popularity in order togain peace is quite true today. A self-peace is there for the taking and can be reached withoutthe title of being "popular."

SAT作文范文点评：

Megan's response, although not as rich as Eric's is still quite adequate. Most SAT readerswould respond to this essay with a 4 and possibly a 5. Remember that each essay has at leasttwo readers. Both scores are added to make a final score out of 12. Megan would probably fallinto the 8–9 range.

She does not make direct mention of the quotes or their authors. However, she opens thesecond paragraph with the comment about popularity affording a sense of "peace," which is areference to the quotation by Lincoln.

Although Megan does not explore the quotes themselves as directly as Eric did, she doessome insightful speculation. She mentions the pitfalls of popularity and what damage acareless slip of the tongue can bring. In addition, the third paragraph does somepsychological analysis of the popular person’s real emotions.

She completes her better-than-average analysis by mentioning the need for self peace andhow attaining that is far more valuable than possessing the label of being popular.

看过这篇优美的写作经典范文，同学们可能发现了自己的差距，但是，有差距不要紧，就怕自己明知道差距还不努力追赶，为了自己的人生不留遗憾，为了明天美利坚升起的太阳，大家还是要努力克服自己的懒惰，多背多记多看，学英语没有什么好方法，无非重复二字。最后，还是要点题，少数人服从多数人这个观点有时往往是错的，当大多数人选择走千军万马走独木桥时，你却一人孤身站立在SAT的考场上，能否笑傲江湖，全凭君决定。